Friday, November 29, 2013

a random story i wrote in 5 minutes (violence warning)

I'm finally done with my Nanowrimo, and I'll make the doc public soon :D
Nanowrimo was a crazy adventure of feels (WHY JESSE WHY MUST YOU DIE ) and insanity (MUST GET 1000 WORDS BEFORE THE END OF FREE PERIOD/TA) but it's finally done. The main character, Kathica, turned into a bit of a jerk, but I didn't mind writing that part. She annoyed me from the beginning.
Sorry for not posting. I was busy being bored.
And I was so bored that I wrote this. Yay! What even is the ending.

"He never thought the day would come, the day that they finally hold him down," Kylin whispered to herself, holding back her tears as she stared longingly out the window. "He always assumed he was stronger, that he was invincible. That no one could take him down that easily. And I wish he hadn't been so wrong." She had her back to me, but the grief in her voice was obvious. She thought I was dead.
She turned her head and finally noticed me lying there on her rock-hard bed, vulnerable, my formerly strong right arm just a stump. "Ledger!" She attempted a grin, but her normally pliant features couldn't manage it. Even more tears streamed down her pale and freckled cheeks. "I thought they killed you. It's no use resisting such a great power, the one that rules this world. You're never going to take over, Ledge, so don't go around scaring your poor little sister."
"They're doing so many things wrong. If I was in charge of things around here, it would be a much better place. Why do they always put the idiots and addlepates at the top?” I probably sounded like a whiny brat, but I hated the way politics worked around here. It was probably because I was now a wanted criminal, charged with minorly injuring a government official. The guy had chopped off my arm, and all I did was trip him, but the stupid law-enforcers treated it like some sort of major crime. "Besides, without my arm, I might as well be dead already. Seriously, Ky, what can I do with only one arm?"
Ky wiped tear after glimmering tear off her face, and her attempt at a smile was much closer this time. It had probably been a while since she had last felt this joyous. "Well, you can run and walk, but you're probably not going to be able to fight as well anymore. Which is actually a good thing. But being the sympathetic sister I am, I'll try and help you, Ledge. You know I'm good with carving things. Should I make you a hook or something? It's the best I can do with the technology avaliable to me."
What would I do with a hook? A claw might be fine for grabbing things, but a hook?! Besides, Ky wasn't actually that good at woodworking, as her failed attempt at a bookshelf had collapsed on me and nearly given me a concussion. But that was when she was just a kid, trying new things. Those days were over.
"I'll manage somehow. I'll still fight, because you were wrong. I am stronger than them, even if they just see me as a petty revolutionary. I will take them down, with just this one arm!" I meant it. I was determined to crush them, to teach those idiots and addlepates about a government of the people and for the people. I was tired of not having a say in foreign policy, of being forced to pay outrageously high taxes (which led to me having to share a house with my younger sister), of not being able to do anything for anyone without people assuming that I was starting a revolution. But Kylin didn't seem to mind any of this.
"Come with me, Ky. That way I can set you up with a government post. Haven't you always wanted to be in charge of the world?" I regretted saying that to my go-with-the-flow sister, so I decided to add another argument. "Besides, if I die, you'll be there to perform my last rites." Glad that I was finally being humble, Ky agreed.
We had to walk all the way to the capital on foot, being dirt-poor as we were. I had a wooden sword in my hook, one that Ky reluctantly modified so it would fit. In my other hand I carried a shield made of the strongest scrap metal I could dig up. Ky strode behind me, genuinely afraid. 
"Ledger Blackthorne! Seize him! Dead or alive, but preferrably dead!" shouted a burly officer, hatred gleaming in his amber eyes. A bullet whizzed through the air, coming straight at my face. I dodged it easily. Kylin, in her small aqua-green dress, wasn't as quick. The perfectly round ball of gunpowder hit her in the face and she fell back onto the dirt. My sister, the one person I actually knew how to love, was gone forever.
"What is this insanity?" I yelled, bursting with anger and hatred and revolutionary fervor. "I just happen to trip an official and you charge me for it, but you kill my sister and go on with your lives?! This is why we need a change, you corrupted pigs!" Another bullet whizzed through the air, this time from further away. I dodged it again. A crowd was beginning to assemble, cheering me on out of sympathy for my loss. Finally, people agreed with me. And they also were armed.
My crowd of supporters began to pull out guns and bows and arrows and swords, killing off all but one of the officials. And that one official shot a bullet which went straight through my heart. I was so close to ruling the world, but I died because of my foolishness, my false sense of supremacy, my pride. And here I am, dear listener, telling you this story from the realm of ghosts.




Saturday, November 16, 2013

sorry!

I've been obsessively writing.
So obsessively that I haven't been able to post chapters 4 through 15 on here.
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What? You want to read more? 
Aww, you're nice! *hugs*
So here's the link to my amazing novel on Google Docs. Because I'm a lazybutt. :D
it takes forever to load though.